Metaphor out of objects....sweet

I really can say I enjoyed coming up with the idea of metaphor objects that would represent a time in my life that I have experience and my still be experiencing even today. Im glad that i received positive impact towards  the class because they all understood what I was trying to imply and I did really get any negative reponses, which Im totally glad. All I had to do is change a few things around.

The BIG idea

Critiquing comments:

Ok so unfortunately the critiques that I received were not good, in which I can highly understand. Hey but at least I did my work I can admit that. I did like the work I did at first but then at the end it didn't come out as I thought it was going to. Some of the comments I got was the size of the fruits that I made didn't go with the piece some what,  I should've lined the top a bit. My framing was a bit off because the claps that I used did not stick right,but it did hang on the wall at least. I am satisfied with my piece I just felt that I could've paid more attention of how it was going to come out rather than just tearing pieces of paper and putting it together.

Random 500 words

WATER STAR PICKLE CAR ROCK
river silver green engine heavy
clear sparkly crunchy wheels pebbles
blue night small honda round
stream big big music bulky
bottle small bumpy trunk color
ocean shooting star juicy speed tank'
tsunami ring sour ticket hard
drowning ear ring long liscens damage
swimming bright slice gas ground
pool famous salad gray old
DANCE MAKE UP PAIN PUPPY CELL PHONE
movement beauty hurt cute screen
wild woman tears adorable calls
party mascara scream fluffy buttons
club lip gloss cuts small talk
techno sexy bruise playful conversation
drunk wedding bone expensive text
heels party numb gulable application
dress powder  time joy schedule 
fist pump mirror pressure leach alarm
strope light party scar collar pictures
FRUIT RING GUM TV DOOR
orange glossy package channel wood
banana bling wrapping remote window
strawberry diamond sweet commercials knob
kiwi gold chew mtv knock
yogurt stone rubber showtime open
kiwi fashion  jaw plasma close
grapes design Extra led heavy
rasberry karrats smacking 3D bell
mango medium bubbles mount slam
cherry silver blow movies pull
LAMP HAPPY ANGRY TOES BED
tall mom argument nails pillow
short car fight soft comforter
bolb smile traffic nail polish tall
cord yellow red lotion queen
plug paid bills pain long twin
power turquoise sweaty short sleep
stand butterfly mad tan blanket
light phone hot white flat
switch blue stab bony warmth
sight cold uncontrolable rough teddy bear
HOUSE HEEL SHOE CHAIR PURSE
family height boy hard bag
door color girl soft shoulder
yard dress run legs wallet
garage form pair bars coach
table dance walk spin space
room work cute squicky zipper
roof thick ugly rolling long
window straps white sit strap
shelter open black lay keys
chimney close flat bend receipes
PERFUME MAN CAMERA WORK SKY
smell masculine flash hours blue
taste strong lanyard tired clouds
strong built film close puffy
weak tall battery open cloudy
volume dark  memory card boots thunder
sense hairy lense retail shinny
female bold click clock dark
warme courage frame money high
cold hairy large customer bright
sexy brave touch electronics white
MONEY PURPLE MOM PEN PAPER
envy grape sweet write white
greed dark  caring ink thin
green color lady grip write
spend rainbow old colors draw
rich clothing young gel erase
poor paint parent medal step
hundreds peace wife clicks cut
change pen sister taps stamp
broke plum loving stab glue
happy shoe burnett marking tear
APARTMENT GYM MOVIES NECKLACE DIARY
rent workout watch sparkling pencil
clean sweat applause devine pen
wash lift laugh diamond notes
lock swim scream gold think
restroom talk eat silver thoughts
bedroom areobics big screen platnum smiles
keys run tickets short  frowns
cook stress free drink long privacy 
shower motivation entertain thick paragraphs
sleep train seats thin secrets
CUP POOL CHICKEN STRING CALENDAR
drink blue good long date
juice cool chewy short month
round relaxing crunchy tie year
water diving fried  cute holiday
tall underwater grilled braclet schedule 
coffe cup swim white knot time
shot cup stroke bbq tight appointment
orange juice fun spicy loose marks
ICE CREAM SANDWICH FLASHLIGHT EYES DRESS
creamy bread sight brown long
sweet toast night blue curvy
flavors lettuce thunder green  tight
calories mustard light big  wide
fatening subway heavy pupil beauty
pint turkey small tiny elegant
frozen tuna bright honey gown
melt  yummy LED girl short
soft delicous button dog goreous
cold pickle batteries see colors