I really can say I enjoyed coming up with the idea of metaphor objects that would represent a time in my life that I have experience and my still be experiencing even today. Im glad that i received positive impact towards the class because they all understood what I was trying to imply and I did really get any negative reponses, which Im totally glad. All I had to do is change a few things around.
Friday, May 6, 2011
Ok so unfortunately the critiques that I received were not good, in which I can highly understand. Hey but at least I did my work I can admit that. I did like the work I did at first but then at the end it didn't come out as I thought it was going to. Some of the comments I got was the size of the fruits that I made didn't go with the piece some what, I should've lined the top a bit. My framing was a bit off because the claps that I used did not stick right,but it did hang on the wall at least. I am satisfied with my piece I just felt that I could've paid more attention of how it was going to come out rather than just tearing pieces of paper and putting it together.